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Do Your Visitors Understand What Your Website Is All About?

Keller Hawthorne | March 29, 2010 | 56 Comments
Content Development, Website Design and Development
Do Your Visitors Understand What Your Website Is All About?

Far too often I come across websites that couldn’t be more vague about their purpose. You know – when you actually have to ask “What does this person do? What is this website about? How does this website relate to me and my needs?”

If your visitors have to ask these questions, you run the risk of losing them. Trust me, if they can’t figure it out quickly, they’re not going to stick around to try to find out. It’s not your visitors’ job to relate to your website or find a reason to stay. It’s YOUR job to relate your website to your visitors and convince them to stay.

The purpose or point of your website really should be something so obvious that a visitor will understand it within the first minute of landing on a page. You don’t have much time to convince a visitor to stay, so you should make it a priority to quickly explain that you are:

  • A blog that teaches people how to ride horses
  • An ecommerce store that sells bathing suits
  • A corporate website that offers web design services
  • Etc, etc.

Being direct and clear about your website’s purpose isn’t a hard thing to accomplish and can be done quite easily using the following tips and methods.

Tip!Not only can you keep your visitors on your site longer by making your website’s purpose clear, you can also better optimize your site for search engine rankings!

1. Say It In Your Business Name and/or Tagline

Some of you have heard about my very first ecommerce store, The KBH Outlet. I opened (and closed it shortly after) 5 years ago – it was my first attempt at making money online. So what was it? Hard to tell by the name, isn’t it? It was a home decor store!

This is a little embarrassing, but guess what my very first tagline was. No, it wasn’t “Your Internet Source for Home Decor” or “Your Home Decor Shop.” It was…

“Providing Integrity and Security for Online Shopping”

What, what, what? How do any of those words relate to home decor? I haven’t a clue. My intention was to “ease” customers into opening their wallets – but what the heck were they opening them for???

Not only did my company name say nothing about business – my tagline couldn’t be more confusing.

I understand that sometimes your company name will lack clarity. Take “Google” for example – what the heck does that mean? However, you must make clear, somehow, what it is your website is all about. If not in your name, then at least in your tagline.

Let me give you another example. The very first tag line for my blog was “Helping Online Entrepreneurs Succeed.” Not bad, but it’s kind of fluffy, don’t you think? During my blog’s redesign last year, I decided to streamline my tagline by changing it to “Your Internet Business Blog.” So, what did this achieve?

  1. Visitors Know They’re On a Blog
  2. Visitors Know My Blog is Related to Internet Businesses
  3. EXTRA – The tagline contains important keywords for SEO

Though the name “FresheVenture” isn’t exactly obvious in its meaning, my tagline is simple, direct, to the point and understandable – perfect for welcoming new visitors!

2. Welcome Your Visitors On EVERY Page of Your Website

This is a trick I picked up on after becoming a blogger. When I first created my blog, I decided to add a welcome box to the top of my sidebar. This welcome box includes a picture of yours truly as well as an intro paragraph of who I am and what my site is about. It then links to my about page to help visitors get to know me even better.

Many websites display some sort of welcome message on their home page, but they tend not to be very effective. Why? Because they’re only on the home page.

The real beauty behind my welcome box is that it appears on EVERY page of my blog! No matter what page a visitor enters my site from, they will be properly introduced to me and my website.

Tip!I love this idea so much that I decided to incorporate it on a website I recently designed for a client – The Learning Café. I used WordPress to publish the site and created a custom theme for it. The home page has a standard welcome section, but if you click through to any other page, you will notice a welcome box in the top of the right sidebar. Not only does it introduce the company, it promotes both owners’ LinkedIn accounts and Facebook Fan Page!

3. Use Language Your Visitors Will Understand

I almost titled this tip “Use Real World Language,” but quickly realized a flaw with that idea. The language of your website must be targeted toward your market. If that means using real world language, great. But what if your website is targeted toward scientists or doctors? Obviously in this case the language will be advanced and not very understandable to someone like me – and that works too! It’s all about relating to YOUR visitors.

Keep in mind that with language you have the ability to set a mood on your website or create assumptions about who you are. Negative and dirty language could leave a bad taste in your visitors’ mouths. Writing as if you’re talking face to face with someone could help nurture relationships. Using formal language could put out a feeling of professionalism.

Language is powerful. Always stay focused on who it is you’re talking to and the impression you’re attempting to get across when writing on your website.

4. Avoid Fluff and Redundant Pages

Do you really need 5 pages to explain what it is your company does? What about taking 50 words to describe your company when 5 or 10 would suffice?

Fluff and redundant pages are patterns I tend to notice with corporate websites. So, what’s wrong with them?

- Fluff LOSES a reader’s attention.
- Redundant pages are just that – very few people will actually read your entire about page, let alone the 4 other accompanying pages.

Internet users are looking for info NOW – not 5 minutes from now. They want information as quickly as they can get. If they can’t find it quickly, they will go somewhere else.

Don’t waste your visitors’ time – and don’t waste yours by going into unnecessary content overload. Keep your content focused, precise and easy to understand.

5. Use Your Keywords In Your Content

If a visitor finds your website through a search engine after typing a specific keyword, it makes sense to ensure that keyword can be found on your website, right? By using your keywords naturally (do not keyword stuff), your content will speak directly to your traffic. Your keywords can also help optimize your site for higher search engine rankings.

Keywords help relate a visitor to your site and keep your content focused. Again, do not overdue it – adding your keywords to your content should be a completely natural process. If your site is about home decor, your content should contain that term.

Tip!If you happen to notice your traffic is high, but your conversion rate is low, take a look at your content. Are you grabbing your visitors’ attention and do they understand what your website is about?

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  • http://www.blogengage.com/story.php?id=50153 Vote on this article at blogengage.com

    Do Your Visitors Understand What Your Website Is All About?…

    Far too often I come across websites that couldn’t be more vague about their purpose. You know – when you actually have to ask “What does this person do? What is this website about? How does this website relate to me and my needs?” If your visitors …

  • http://www.happymakernow.com/blog/ Debbie@happymaker

    Hi Keller,

    Great post. I think the welcome part on every page is a great idea. Guess I'm going to have to try that. I know what you mean about going to a site and trying to figure out what they are saying. This has happened to me and I just leave.

    thanks for all the good information after all I do want to keep my visitors happy!

    Debbie

  • http://thatgirlisfunny.com/ Cheryl

    Hi Keller,
    How timely! I've added in some new items to my blog ThatGirlisFunny recently. I like my new additions, but this weekend I wondered 'what is my blog about again?”

    My tagline is “Adventures in living a healthy, juicy life”. Luckily, that provides a nice umbrella over a range of topics. I make an effort to tie each post to the tag line by providing information in an entertaining way. Underneath it all, in each post, I provide something that allows people to “stay young from the inside out” (another tag line) by taking on a new habit or taking a risk by trying something new. There's no sitting still around me!

    I like the welcome idea on every blog post too. I have to figure out how to set that up on my blog. Great info!

  • http://www.personal-growth-with-corinne-edwards.com/ Corinne Edwards

    I used to have a welcome on my page. Somehow it disappeared – I did not even notice it -probably by moving some stuff around.

    Thanks for that VERY IMPORTANT TIP. The whole article was excellent but that one tip is pure gold.

    Thanks, Keller.

  • david365

    Keller
    Its taken me a while to grasp this, partly because I had my own doubts about where I was heading! You can't be all things to all people. I've created a picture of my “typical” visitor and try to write for them each time.
    David

  • beverlyhillsfarmgrl

    Hi, Keller,

    Congrats on your success as a blogger and as a future mom! I know you are extremely busy, but it would be great if you would follow up on your critique of my website as promised for winning your 2009 Design Contest. I am trying to increase my readership and ranking, and your comments would be most helpful in achieving my goals.

    Many thanks in advance!

    Best,

    Dana

  • smittenbybritain

    Hi, I love the idea about the welcome box. I'm using your Fresh Theme Journal template to move to WP this week and I'll miss my “About Me” widget from Blogger. Can you give us some tips on how to make one? Thanks!

  • MichelleVandepas

    This is my 10th blog. I'm finally learning .. LOL Thanks Keller – I've started to really focus, get clear, understand who my client is, optimize on 3 short keyphrases, and foucs.

  • beverlyhillsfarmgrl

    Hi, Keller,

    Congrats on your success as a blogger and as a future mom! I know you are extremely busy, but it would be great if you would follow up on your critique of my website as promised for winning your 2009 Design Contest. I am trying to increase my readership and ranking, and your comments would be most helpful in achieving my goals.

    Many thanks in advance!

    Best,

    Dana

  • http://www.smittenbybritain.com/ SmittenbyBritain

    Hi, I love the idea about the welcome box. I'm using your Fresh Theme Journal template to move to WP this week and I'll miss my “About Me” widget from Blogger. Can you give us some tips on how to make one? Thanks!

  • MichelleVandepas

    This is my 10th blog. I'm finally learning .. LOL Thanks Keller – I've started to really focus, get clear, understand who my client is, optimize on 3 short keyphrases, and foucs.

  • http://beatschindler.com/blog Beat Schindler

    Keller, you're so right, the marketing message is the foundation of a business – and “coming across a website” is that website's marketing message. It is said that if you
    create a good marketing message/website, you can reap the rewards for years to come. Like eating less to lose weight, it's easier said than done :-) Getting it right is a struggle for most of us. And fun, too. Your Point 2 hits the nail on the head, too – and reminds me to repeat more … yet not overdo it because Humpty Dumpty cannot be put together easily if squandered :-) As you point out, visitors are tuned into WIIFM (What's In It For Me) – who is the service for and will it achieve tangible results (for me)? In addition to your 5 Steps, there's one other thing I've largely neglected so far and want to do more of in the future: the taking of a strong, clear, bold position – certain to offend someone. I see more and more evidence, to “be different” is not just good marketing, but a foundational necessity. It's related to my personal journey rather than marketing or websites per se, but thought I'd throw it into the mix anyway :-) B@

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Hi Debbie! I do the same – I just leave. It's easy to think we're obvious when we're the person behind the site, but sometimes we have to make things even more clear.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Thank you Cheryl!

    I'll admit I left my own blog more general in purpose (Internet businesses rather than ecommerce, blogging, etc) so that I could write about all the topics I have an interest in. I too have wondered at times if I'm focused enough in my writing. Considering who I'm writing for has been a big help, but I still go off onto tangents.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    You've got it right David – imagining who it is you're writing for makes all the difference. We can't please everyone and by attempting to do so, we may end up pleasing no one.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Dana – I promise to make your review a priority for completing this week. I tried emailing you recently, but the email got returned to me. I will use your website to contact you as I wanted to offer you and Will some extra free advertising in return for my tardiness. I've been so frazzled this year – I appreciate your patience!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Oooh – I like that idea for a tutorial Melissa! I'll add it to my upcoming tuts list.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    You sound very focused Michelle!

  • http://www.smittenbybritain.com/ SmittenbyBritain

    Bless you. I love yours by the way.
    I'm moving my Blogger blog over to WP this week using your Fresh Theme so wish me luck! The theme looks great it's the move I'm worried about. Concerned I'm going to lose Blogger followers. Fingers crossed.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Wow – your comment interests me a lot Beat. Perhaps you could publish a post explaining more about your “being different” take on marketing – better yet would be a guest post on my blog ;) – interested?

  • http://femalemenopausementors.com/ Bruce

    Some great things to remember. It relates to the template you choose and to the design you lay out. I know that having your picture and logo are important but I hadn't thought about every page. They can arrive from anywhere to any page so it is a great idea and great points to remember.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    You will love WordPress Melissa! What are your specific concerns with losing your Blogger followers? I can't wait to add your site to my showcase – it looks so good!

  • http://www.smittenbybritain.com/ SmittenbyBritain

    I'm feeling very confused between the Google Friends Connect and followers who are actually following through Blogger (or the Blogger dashboard.) I've read that they are actually two different things. I thought since I own my own domain name that nothing should change since my blogger followers are actually following my URL but now I'm not so sure. I've spoken to some other bloggers who actually lost followers after the move. Tried to find answers online but there's so much confusing information out there it makes my head spin.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Huh… probably a great reason for people to start off with WordPress. I'm afraid I don't have much experience with this, but I believe Google Friends Connect is completely separate from Blogger. As for specific Blogger followers, I would imagine there might be a way for other blogger users to subscribe/follow blogger blogs. In this case, you may end up losing some. Let me know how it goes – sounds like it will be an interesting transition.

  • Amy LeForge

    This is an excellent reminder to take a look at my site from my readers' viewpoint. Thanks, Keller!

  • http://blogtechguy.com/ Joel Williams

    Well said Keller, I like to tell people exactly what I do in a few words as previously I had a job that took 10 minutes to explain. A friend has a job that he tells people – “I build roads”. Of course it's more complicated than that but he can sum it up nicely in three words, and I like that.

  • http://tv.massoutsource.com/ Tyrone

    This is so fun-learning Keller!

    Creating a tagline sometimes can really be more complicated than putting in a blog name. As for mine, I've named it Internet Business Path – The Path to Help Internet Businesses Profit Online – well, fortunately, it sounds specific enough that my blog aims to help internet businesses to create a profit and could simply mean e-commerce tips, internet marketing and so much more. And…it's true that taking into consideration the “general” idea of helping internet businesses makes it easier for me to open up topics and explore all other areas in internet marketing and blogging that'll help my readers.

    Most importantly, I wouldn't forget the “Welcome Box” tip that you've provided. This makes the readers know the author better that leads to keeping the tight relationships and putting trust that you'll be able to help them because you're “reliable” and you provide value with everything more than a specific keyword. :)

    Thanks a lot Keller, I love staying at your blog.

    Tyrone

  • http://www.webuildyourblog.com/ Andrew Rondeau

    In my corporate days we used to spend days if not weeks working on our departments slogan (tagline). They'd be 10 Managers in a room, coffee on tap and we would scrutinize every single word.

    Then we would come back the next day and do it again.

    We would ask a few of the Team Leaders and real workers – what they thought and get some feedback.

    We would re-work it.

    We would announce the fluffy slogan and many would say, 'that took you a week to come up with. Take me five minutes!'.

    Then 6 months later we'd do it all again!

    If you treat your blog as your business, a similar approach should be taken.

    Not necessarily taking a week to come up with the slogan…but come up with your slogan and ask a few of your customers.

    In my autoresponder, after 60 days or so of being a subscriber to my free giveaway I ask my customers exactly the sort of questions you asked in this post. The feedback is vital.

    I do like having my slogan embedded into my header. I see so many blogs that just have a nice picture – which is nice but not very business like.

    Andrew

  • http://www.kingrpg.net/ KINGRPG

    I like that you think. Thank you for share very much.

  • http://beatschindler.com/blog Beat Schindler

    Hi Keller,

    Thanks for your invitation to be a guest on your blog. I'd be happy to! Have a couple of hotties on my plate, might take a while. Do you have a specific timing on your mind, or is “when ready” okay?

    Beat

  • http://peacefulprosperity.com/5-flavors-of-true-happiness-2/ Benjamin

    This is a great point, Keller.

    It took me forever to come up with an elevator pitch for my site… and when I did, I was so disorganized about it, I struggled for weeks to work one out.

    I now have one, but it might still be a bit too vague… and I'm not really hitting any of my keywords with it.

    I might be headed back to the drawing board…

    I think I'll be using your 'top of the sidebar' idea.

    :-)

    keep smiling,

    Ben

  • lisa82367

    Great post — I am just starting a new blog, and will use every tip! Thanks! I especially like your comment that states its “your job to convince visitors to stay.” I think that's also how we get them to return — when they like what they read, or they learn something, or are entertained, etc.

  • sherribeingthechangeiwishtosee

    Keller,

    Over the past 3 years my blog has developed into something a bit different than I first thought it would be. I need to go back through it and change my about page. There are a couple of other pages that probably need to be removed or changed to focus more on my mission: to make readers aware of problems in the world that need attention, and may not make the main stream media. I also write op/ed pieces about some of the topics.

    Thanks,
    Sherri

  • jan_queenofkaos

    Hi Keller, some great reminders here. It is so easy to get off track but so important to be clear.

    Another thing that I've been trying to do lately is to check my recent posts listing or google reader to see if my posts on the whole reflect the topic of my blog and to try to look at them as if from a readers point of view to see if they would really be of interest. This also helps me to try harder to make my post titles better.

  • http://www.ryanhanley.com/about Ryan Hanley

    Glad to have you back Keller. This is very good stuff. I struggled with this issue at first too. I wanted to target my website for local and state-wide traffic but also have visitors from anywhere that were interested in learning about insurance. The first 6 months I had the same traffic numbers as the Sahara desert.

    But idea of using language my visitors woudl understand has changed that some and things are started to pick up.

    Ryan H, http://www.ryanhanley.com

  • tombabinszki

    Very nice post, great ideas. Until recently I thought everybody who comes to my site knows what accessibility consulting means, after all, they must be looking for it. Just recently I got a comment thtat it is not all that obvious. I ran a test and asked around some random people to explain to me what accessibility consulting means. Sure enough, nothing like what I'm trying to sell. Once I added more information on the top of the page, visitors tend to be more focused and targeted.

  • catascouts

    Thank you for a great post, Keller!

  • catascouts

    Thank you for a great post, Keller!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Thanks! I'm with you Tyrone. Though it's not very “niche-e” to use a more general tagline, it does open up options for post topics.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    I used to come up with company names and taglines WAY too quickly due to excitement and impatience. I've since learned to “sleep on it.” Let the ideas simmer and definitely get feedback from others.

    I almost called my blog “Freshpreneur.” Fortunately, my husband pointed out the similarity to “fresh manure” and I went back to the drawing board.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Sorry for the late response Beat – I'm way behind on my comments.

    Anytime you're ready. I'm definitely eager to share your thoughts with my audience!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Absolutely Lisa!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Using your keywords is a great way to stay on target with your tagline. If you use the same words your target market uses to search for your type of information, you should be on the right track.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Hi Sherri! We all need to analyze our websites every few months. Things change and it's a good idea to ensure our websites change with them.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Great tip Jan! I love the idea of reading a post from an RSS reader – definitely makes you more aware how well your headlines and content read outside of your blog.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Awesome Ryan! I also see you're using a new StudioPress theme – looking good!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Great feedback Tom! I see corporate websites make the language mistake a lot. They assume the lingo within their industry is well known amongst their audience. It's just not always the case.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Thanks! I'm with you Tyrone. Though it's not very “niche-e” to use a more general tagline, it does open up options for post topics.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    I used to come up with company names and taglines WAY too quickly due to excitement and impatience. I've since learned to “sleep on it.” Let the ideas simmer and definitely get feedback from others.

    I almost called my blog “Freshpreneur.” Fortunately, my husband pointed out the similarity to “fresh manure” and I went back to the drawing board.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Sorry for the late response Beat – I'm way behind on my comments.

    Anytime you're ready. I'm definitely eager to share your thoughts with my audience!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Absolutely Lisa!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Using your keywords is a great way to stay on target with your tagline. If you use the same words your target market uses to search for your type of information, you should be on the right track.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Hi Sherri! We all need to analyze our websites every few months. Things change and it's a good idea to ensure our websites change with them.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Great tip Jan! I love the idea of reading a post from an RSS reader – definitely makes you more aware how well your headlines and content read outside of your blog.

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Awesome Ryan! I also see you're using a new StudioPress theme – looking good!

  • http://www.fresheventure.com Keller Hawthorne

    Great feedback Tom! I see corporate websites make the language mistake a lot. They assume the lingo within their industry is well known amongst their audience. It's just not always the case.

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